User talk:ShadowKirby: Difference between revisions

:Hi! There's certainly progress with the sandbox, but I'm afraid it's not quite up to WiKirby standards yet. The section for ''Kirby's Return to Dream Land Deluxe'' specifically has second person ("you"), which goes against [[WiKirby:Writing style]]. Other sections could be more specific to referring which theme appears where, and othrr things differ from the usual music page standards. Moreover, some appearances are not covered yet, such as "Kirby's Ultra-Gourmet Memories" (''Kirby's Dream Buffet'') or "Secret Area: HAL Room (Kirby's Dream Buffet 1)" (''Kirby's Return to Dream Land Deluxe''). I do believe the page is on the right tracks though; if you can apply these changes to the page, it will be in very good shape :) Best of luck with the draft, and let me know if you need help. {{User:ShadowKirby/sig}} 06:10, 15 January 2024 (UTC)

::OK! Thanks for the advice and i will try my hardest! :) ~ {{User:MetaKirbo/sig}} 06:16, 15 January 2024 (UTC)